Friday, October 7, 2016

OctPoWriMo #7 2016: Dieter's Lament

The Dieter’s Lament

Lips and tongue and teeth will say
salty, sweet and tasty.
And, hasty,
eat.

Defeat is
pastry.



Poet's Note:  The prompt was tasty...diets are on the mind...guess why.

4 comments:

  1. A universal poem, Anna. I like the "tasty" "hasty" "pastry." Thank you. xoA

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  2. I don't believe in diets, I believe in Health at Every Size. (Yes, it's a real thing.) But I did find the poem entertaining!

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  3. Like Annis, I found the words, hasty, tasty, pastry went well in these few lines. I've written about food this week:
    gramswisewords.blogspot.com

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  4. Like Annis, I found the words, hasty, tasty, pastry went well in these few lines. I've written about food this week:
    gramswisewords.blogspot.com

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